My Holidays
Last saturday I went to rainbows end and went on to cool rides.
When I went onto the rides i was scared and happy at the same time. It was so fun it was my first time there it was cool I have never ever in my life been there but it was cool I went with my mum and dad and my 2 brothers and 1 sister and aunt and cuz bro when i was there i was scared to go on to the rollercoaster it was fun Even the fear fall was cool and i loved the bumper boats another thing was that i ate popcorn.After that i went to New world and went shopping and then i went to mcdonald's and got frozen drink then we went home and played on our tablets.
A few Monday’s ago i went to the park and played at the ramp’s with my brother’s and sister on my scooter and me and my brothers were racing
And doing an cool race’s it was fun and after we went to get a frozen drink
And went home.
Last Thursday i went to the movies to watch The secret life of pets it was a funny movie i like the part when Mel the pug said squirrels are going to invade Earth that was so funny and we ate popcorn it was a extreme popcorn it was yum liked that movie it was funny.
I hope you like it enjoy!!
I hope you like it enjoy!!
Hi there, my name is John and I am a student in room 4 at wesley primary School. I really like how you described all about rainbows end. It made me wanna go there but maybe next time you could re check your work for capital letters or full stops and make sure u don't use that much ands. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsjohnp.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteI really like that you described rainbows end, Iv'e never actually been rainbows end before so maybe you could use other words instead of cool like awesome,wonderful or magnificent. Anyways always check your work if it makes sense and double check for capital letters. If you would like to see my blog it is http://wpslleytonh.blogspot.co.nz/
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